lennonfan909
Trying to change the whole wide world
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Limitless, undying love which shines around me like a million suns and calls me on and on...
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Post by lennonfan909 on May 17, 2009 5:31:03 GMT 1
This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!! ;-)
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Post by taylor on May 25, 2009 5:58:41 GMT 1
I like your fan fiction. It's very good. I'm ready for more.
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Post by rheebles on Aug 26, 2009 12:47:02 GMT 1
I know the last time I wrote was in May and it's been 4 months, but the computer was broken and I didn't get a chance to put up the other chapters. So I'll start where I left off.
By now you should know this fan fiction is not suitable for children.
Chapter 8.
As we sat down around the TV with our dinners, I found it very hard to eat, John was sitting right opposite me, and I found it very hard to concentrate on my dinner. "Lee, are you okay, you're not really eating are you not hungry," May asked. "Oh I am, I think I'm getting a sore throat that's all don't worry about me, actually I think I might put some more cheese on it." I got up and left May and John to eat their food. As I got to the kitchen and got the cheese from the fridge and the grater from the side I realised I was shaking, I couldn't feel it but when I looked at my hand I couldn't hold the greater still. Pull yourself together girl, I said to myself, I mean did I make the right decision for myself. I went back to sit down on the sofa, John and already finished his, but May was still halfway. "I forgot to tell you my brother Simon's coming over next week," I said to May trying to start a conversation. "Si, Oh my god, how is he? I haven't seen him in ages," May said. "He's doing really well, did I tell you he married," "No, who to?" "Selina Wakeman," "Oh that's so sweet they were going out since he was 16," "Yep and she's expecting, so she can't risk traveling, but yeah he's coming over," "I would love to see him again, is he still good looking as I remember?" "Erm. well he's lost his hair a bit but he hasn't changed," "Oh could I stay a couple of extra days just to see him?" John's face turned to May. "If you want, you will have to change rooms though, as that's Simon, you can take the spare bedroom, it's smaller, but it's still a nice size," "Ah well there wouldn't be any point," John said. "Yes there would be I get to catch up with Simon, who I haven't seen in god knows how long," "What you actually know him," "Well of course, he came to visit Lee a few times and we got on very well," "You're not jealous are you John?" I said wanting to see his reaction. "No, it's just that we have already made other plans," "Yeah which aren't written in stone," May said. "This is a good time to stay a bit longer," "Look can we at least think about it nearer the time," "Well okay, but I really would like to see him," "Let's just see how it goes," As May and I finished our food I took the plates into the kitchen, I put the tap on to start washing up, a faint tap came from the door, John was standing in the door frame. "May insisted I help you out," John said. "Oh, right okay well you can start by putting the dry stuff away in it's right place," I threw him a cloth and went back to doing the washing up. "Be honest with me here, do you want us to stay a couple of extra days or so?" John asked me. "Well I would like May to stay longer,you. You can take a run and jump for all I care," As I said that John dropped one of my plates and it smashed. I looked at him, "You did that on purpose," I bent down to pick up the pieces, John stood over me still drying the other utensils. As I threw away the broken plate and went back to washing up, John came in from behind me and whispered in my ear. " Say anything like that to me again, and it won't be just a shoddy plate I'll break," He then leaned hard into me making me feel his full weight. "See what you're missing this could still be yours, just let me know and I'll come to you," He touched me intimately and kissed me on the neck and walked off. By the time I had finished tidying up the kitchen I was feeling extremely tired. I went to the front room to see May with her feet on John's lap. "Look, I'm feeling quite tired so I'm going to bed, so I'll see you in the morning," "Okay well, I hope you feel better," May said. "What?" "Your throat," "Of course, yeah me too, 'night," "night," I made my way up to my bedroom, locked the door and got into bed, but I didn't fall asleep. John was reeling in my head, too much had happened today, too much I couldn't handle. Everything was playing on my mind. I'll wake up in the morning and everything will be okay again, yeah, I closed my eyes. Nope that didn't work, just get him out of your head girl. I still stared at the ceiling, I then couldn't believe what I was about to do next, I got up and unlocked my bedroom door. It was a risk but I wanted to see how for John would go. I felt stupid for doing it, but my curiosity got the better of me. I went back into bed and still laid there with my eyes open this time just staring. I could feel my eyes getting heavy. Before I fell asleep, I did something I haven't done in a very long time, I prayed hoping for something to protect me, after that I slept like a baby.
sorry for taken soooooooo long.
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Post by taylor on Sept 13, 2009 4:53:59 GMT 1
I look forward to the next chapter. I like your story. It's very interesting so far.
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Post by rheebles on Dec 19, 2009 1:51:03 GMT 1
Okay I've made up my mind I'm going to finish this, no matter what, I've practically finished writing the story out, and it's unfair that I've kept it for myself, so here is where we left off...
Chapter 9
As I woke up I looked at my alarm and saw it was 10.30am, I looked at my door and saw it was still closed, John obviously didn't come in, which was a relief and made it easier with the decision I made. I got up opened the door and went downstairs. John and May were still in bed, I poured myself some cornflakes, I sat at the breakfast table thinking about what I should do. Hmm, I haven't been singing for a while, maybe I'll go in the studio, just to see how it is. I finished my breakfast and made my way to the outhouse. Thinking about what to sing, I went to my father's record collection to see if there was anything, I could sing along to. I saw Bizet's Carmen and put on my favourite La Habenera, I put the record on faded the singer and started to singalong, my voice wasn't perfect as I hadn't warmed up, but the singing brought me back to the times I performed on stage. As soon as Simon goes I'll go back on the road, I just missed it so much. I closed my eyes and started dancing remembering the steps we learnt for the opera. As I swung around and opened my eyes, John was standing behind the glass, I stopped in my tracks. "Why do you have a bad habit of sneaking up on people," I said. He laughed, "Don't stop on my account, I was really enjoying that," "Yeah, well, it wasn't for your entertainment." I turned the record off and sat down in a chair. John opened the door and came in. "You left your door unlocked," He said. I looked at him "What?" "Last night, you left it unlocked," "Oh I must of forgotten to-" "Yeah right, that's complete bullshit and you know it," "Well how do you know my bedroom door was unlocked?" "Because I came in, I watched you sleep, you looked very peaceful and beautiful, I even stroked your face," My eyes couldn't leave John's face, "Why would you do that?" I asked. "Because I love you," I turned away. "John, look okay I left the bedroom open for you, because I wanted to see what you would do, I didn't know what I was doing..." John came towards me and kissed me. "You can have me right now if you like?" He said with a smile. " I don't know," "C'mon it's just me and you down here, May's still in bed, we haven't got anything to lose." I looked into his eyes and saw that he was being sincere. "Okay," We started kissing and taking each other clothes off, by the time we were naked I pushed John onto the chair and gave him oral pleasure, John tilted his head back, as I finished I pulled him off and sat myself with my legs wide open, "Your turn," He put his mouth on my sex, the heat of his mouth made melt, I felt I was on the verge of ecstacy, but he stopped before I could climax. I realised I was already sweating, just from the oral. As John stood up so did I, he sat down on the chair and held onto my waist, I turned around so my back was to John's face, as he entered me. Our motions were thoughtless we just blended together not caring about what we were doing. I leaned back with my head on John's shoulder, he turned his head and licked my mouth, we then started tonguing. All of a sudden my body started shaking, I took my hand away from the myself, I put my hands around his head and tried to ride it out. Before I knew it I was having an orgasm, tugging onto John's hair, John then himself started to go more vigorously, he then leant forward and gave me three hard thrusts and started breathing shallowly. I leaned back onto him, even though it was over I didn't want him out of me. "I could stay like this forever with you," "Me too,"He said back. "I never felt like that before, I think that was the best ever, we should do in here more often," I said to him with a smile on my face. "You were amazing too, I hope you have tricks up your sleeves." "Well you can always found out," I got up and nearly fell, which made both and John and I laugh " I don't think I've recovered yet," He stood up and started dressing me and me with him. As we stood looking at each other we took each others hands and locked fingers. "You know I'm really glad I met you and I would stay a couple of extra days just for you," "That's very sweet I would like that alot," John kissed me "I think we better get out of here before we start again," "Yeah I agree," I said. We left the outhouse together smiling and made our way back to the house, we looked in the kitchen and saw May making herself some breakfast, I smiled at John and started to walk a bit faster so there was a bit of distance. I opened the door and May was just about to come out of the kitchen. "Morning May," I said to her. "Morning, where were you?" She asked. "Just in the outhouse, showing John my record collection," I said hoping she'd buy it. "Okay," May went and sat down at the breakfast table. John then entered and gave May a kiss on the forehead. "It's a very nice day, there's a park a couple of miles ahead, I could drive you there," I said. "Yeah, okay," May said. "Sounds fine to me, I'll just go and get ready," John said. "Yeah so will I, I've already had breakfast," John and I both made our way to the stairs me behind John as we got to the top step and pulled me out of eye view. "Ever done it in a park before?" He asked me. "No," I replied "Wanna try?" I nodded, he took my face and kissed me, "God I wish I was getting into the bath with you," "Me with you in the shower," We kissed and broke away from each other, as I walked to my bedroom I took my shirt off so he could see my naked back. I closed the door behind me and started dancing around the room.
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Post by rheebles on Dec 22, 2009 0:53:28 GMT 1
Chapter 10
Exhilaration bounded over my body, I have never felt so great in my life. John was what I wanted. I didn't care how long we had as long as we had each other. A quick wash, brushed my hair put on my make up and summer clothes I was raring to go. I went downstairs and started preparing for the picnic, May and John were upstairs, which I knew I had to get used to. By the time I had made the sandwiches, John and May still hadn't come downstairs, making sure I didn't think about what they were doing, I prepared the fruit salads, got 3 bottles of coke, 1 bottle of wine and a selection of cakes. I had turned into a bit of a domestic godess...well sort of. I put everything away in the hamper and then sat down on sofa waiting for John and May. 10 minutes later and I was still waiting, I had enough I went upstairs and knocked on their bedroom door. "Guys c'mon, it's getting late, it's gonna be dark by the time we get there if we don't hurry up." I heard muffled voices but I couldn't hear what they were saying, "Guys are you okay," I turned the handle and to my surprise the door opened. I was in but I still couldn't see John or May anywhere, but I realised that the en-suite door was locked, laughter come from the room and that was my cue to leave, a pang of jealousy hit me. It was a half an later by the time they actually came downstairs. "Well you two took your time," I said. "Sorry, we got a bit carried away," May said "Yeah well, it' getting late so we should go now," "Of course," I went into the kitchen to pick up the hamper and when I came out May was leaning into John which annoyed me. "Can at least one of you get picnic mats," I said tetchily. John gave me a funny look but broke away from May "I'll go," He said. "Thank you," I went out to the car and put the hamper in the boot, John came out carrying 3 picnic mats and put them behind the hamper. "Is that everything?" May asked whilst walking towards the car. "It should be, I'll just go and check and lock the house, wait in the car, I won't be long." I went back to the house, looked in the kitchen to see if we forgotten anything, nope, so everything seemed to be in order. I locked the house up and entered the car, May was in the front seat and John was just behind. "So are you ready?" I asked. "Yeah!" They both announced in unison, I started laughing. As we arrived, the place was very quiet which was rather unusual. "That's weird, normally the place is teeming with people, I wonder where they are?" I asked. "Suits me fine," John said. "I had a feeling you'd say that," I laughed. "Hey there looks like a nice spot," May pointed out. "Good choice May, I'll just park up and we can have our picnic," I said. As we sat down and got our food out, I remembered there was a lake nearby. "Hey do you wanna go to the lake, you can swim in it?" I asked. "I'm game," John said. "May?" May looked at me, " I can't swim," she replied. "What you mean to tell me, you haven't learned since all those years I've met you?" "You know I have a slight fear of water," "But I thought you overcame that," She nodded no. "Well, I'm still going, what about you John?" He nodded whilst stuffing his face with egg cress sandwich. "Well, we'll just have something to eat and we'll head off, you don't mind looking after the stuff do you May?" "No of course not," As John and I had something to eat, we made our way to the lake, leaving May with the picnic, as soon as we both out of sight, John pulled me and gave me a long lingering kiss "You're something else," "Whatever could you mean Mr Lennon?" I said playfully. "You knew she couldn't swim," I smiled at him and gave him a kiss. "You know what I'm in the mood for" I said. "What?" John replied. "Skinny Dipping," I then pushed John and ran towards the lake taking my clothes off as I went along and jumped into the lake, the water was cold but refreshing, John was walking and laughing at the same time. "You nutter!" He shouted and ran towards me taking his clothes off until he was fully naked in front of me and jumped in the lake making the water splash over me, John swam towards me, and grabbed my feet as I floated on the water, making me turn as the heat of the sun hit me and the coolness of the water embraced me and made me feel alive. John this time swam, towards me and grabbed onto my waist, my legs this time in the water. "God this is beautiful," He said to me. "If I could I would live out here permanently," I said "Well, why don't you?" "Well a part from not being able to afford it, believe it or not, I get homesick, I love London, I love the hussle and bussle of life, and most of my friends back there, so I just feel like I can never part from there," "Fair enough, but look around you, you could have this," "I know, but it wouldn't make any difference, do you know how bored and lonely I was before you May arrived, this is beautiful but it's not enough," "Well let make the best of it," As John said that he stroked my hair and kissed me on the cheek, whilst holding on to my waist, he then moved his left hand and started caressing me, I wrapped my legs around him, he then let go and leant back with my legs still around him. "Make love to me," I whispered. John looked at me, he then swam to the bank and got out of the lake fully naked leaving me in there by myself. He turned around "Come on then," I got out of the water fast as I could, and went towards John, it was still bright but there wasn't a soul in sight, we kissed and then I laid down on the grass and John next to me. He slightly caressed my tummy and worked his way up to my breasts. "God, your so beautiful," he said and started to move slowly down towards my sex making me feel intense pleasure, I then rubbed him slowly, he then moved and laid on top of me and started nuzzling my neck as I caressed the back of his body, John entered me, slowly making me feel every inch of him, he then started moving at a faster pace making my body rise up with him, I then found myself, sitting up with John still in me, our speed this time was not friendly, as we moved against each others embraces. I couldn't let John go, not this time, for as long as he was with me he was mine.
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Post by snoopy on Dec 27, 2009 22:22:57 GMT 1
Hi You're a really gifted writer !! I found your story brilliant . Will there be another chapter ? Would love to read more... Snoopy
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Post by rheebles on Feb 1, 2010 11:09:44 GMT 1
Chapter 11
We got dressed and started to make our way back to May, before we got into eye view John quickly took my hand, I turned around. "What is it?" I asked. "I don't have that much time left with you, but I just want to say, I don't regret this, your very special Lee, and I do love you, I just wanted you to know that," He said. I looked at him and smiled, I then grabbed him and then hugged him as tightly as I could. "I'm going to miss you so much," I cried. "Hey, I'm not gone yet," I laughed "We better head back, it's already been an hour," "Doesn't time fly when your having fun," We walked back towards May, but couldn't see her anywhere. "This is the right spot," I said. John looked at me, "The food's gone," "Well she can't have gone far," "Maybe she went back home," "Maybe," John and I looked at each other and we both were thinking the same thing. "I think she knows," John said. My heart pounded in my chest, I looked away and folded my arms enclosing myself. "We're going to have to go back," John said. Yes I nodded, but I didn't want to, I wanted to stay here and not go back. I then fell on to the grass, my legs felt numb, John quickly grabbed me. "What have we done?" I cried. "Don't talk like that, okay," John said. Tears were streaming down my face, I felt sick. "Can you walk?" John asked. My legs felt better so I nodded yes. "Are you fit to drive?" "I think so," "C'mon" John and I made our way back to the car. As we reached the car we both got in, John called see my hands shaking on the wheel. "Are you sure you can drive?" John asked. "Just give me a minute," I then started the ignition but then stalled. "Shit," I tried again and this time got the car in gear. I drove as slowly as I could, I didn't feel confident enough to drive any faster, John and I stayed silent all the way we couldn't look at each other. As I entered the driveway, the house came into sight, I parked the up but didn't get out of the car, I just stared at the house. "This is it," I said. "Yeah, looks like it," John said whilst taking my hand. We both got all of the car, and made our way to the front door, I opened the door but couldn't see May anywhere, we made our way upstairs, this time I could hear something, I entered John and May's bedroom and there was May, packing her and John's belonging. "May," I called out weakly. She stopped what she was doing, but didn't turn around. "May, please look at me?" She turned around, her face was blotchy from crying, she just stared at me, her face was like thunder, I have never seen May look so angry. She walked towards me, I didn't move, then a sharp pain hit across my face." "YOU BITCH!" May screamed, she grabbed me by the hair and pushed me to the floor falling down on the floor with me, I grabbed her hands trying to stop her from hitting me again. "MAY PLEASE!" "YOU f**kING BITCH, HOW COULD YOU!" John ran into the room and grabbed May off me. "WHAT THE HELL'S GOING ON!" John shouted. I looked at May and then at John, May pushed herself away off John. "We're leaving, now," May said "May, please, can we just talk about it," John said. "Oh I have nothing to say to that whore," May said whilst looking at me. I got up and brushed myself off. "This isn't right, we have to talk," John said. "Okay, we can talk, how long?" May asked, John and I looked at each other. "C'mon, 1st day, 2nd day, what is it?" "The day after we went clubbing," John said. "What the third day!" May exclaimed. She then clapped her hand "Well, I should congratulate you, normally takes you a few hours before you're sticking it into some poor tart, and you as well, well done for holding off for that long," "May, please, I'm sorry, I didn't mean this to happen, please," I cried. "I thought you, you wouldn't hurt me, your my best friend, you wouldn't do something like this, but I was wrong, you're just like those other whores he's f**ked, do you think this actually means anything, because you're wrong, he doesn't love you, he doesn't give a shit about you, he probably wouldn't see you again, you mean nothing," I stared at May, May changed before me, she wasn't the sweet fun loving girl I was friends with, she was a cold hearted bitch and I knew I deserved everything she said. "John is it true what she said?" I asked. John looked at me. "I'm sorry, but it's true, I probably wouldn't see you again," John said. May smiled coldly. "Well if that's how you feel, I think it's best you leave," "C'mon John, let's go," May said, she zipped up her case and John grabbed his case too and walked passed me. No one looked at me, not even John, I stood on the spot. I heard the gravel on the drive, I went to the window and put my hand on the pane and watched them drive out of my life. As soon as they were gone, I looked around realised what I had done, I screamed and ran into my bedroom, I smashed everything on my dressing table, I couldn't stop my self, my body was out of control, I just broke anything in my way. I then stopped and looked around me, broken glass was spilled and spilled make-up was everywhere. I fell to my knees and burst into tears, I had lost something very special, but I didn't know who I would miss the most. An hour later I cleaned up the mess I made, as I carried on the phone rang, I stopped in my tracks, and went downstairs, but I didn't pick it up, I just stared at it and let it rang, when it stopped, I just stared at it. It rang again, this time I picked it up. "Hello," I said. "Lee, it's me," "Simon, oh hey bro, are you alright?" "Good thanks, I'm going to be coming in the afternoon tomorrow," Simon said. "Erm yeah, that's fine, so I'll see you tomorrow then," "Yeah sure, bye," "Bye," I put the phone down and made my way back upstairs before I got to the top the phone rang again I went back downstairs and answered it. "What now Simon?" "Lee?" I didn't say anything. "Lee, it's me, can we talk?" "John?" "I can't stay on the line for long," I started crying. "I just wanted to say that, every second I spent with you meant everything to me, and that I will always love you," "John, will I ever see you again?" "I don't know, I've got alot to sort out, I'm not sure," "What about May, how is she?" "Coping, but I think she's putting on a front, we haven't spoken since we left." "John, I..." My voice lost it's sound. "Hey, it will get better, just have faith in yourself, it's not the end, I promise." He then put the phone down making me wonder what he meant.
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Post by rheebles on Feb 1, 2010 11:49:08 GMT 1
Epilogue
8 Months later.
Uproarious applause filled the theatre, I stood on the stage gleaming with excitement and relief, it was our third night and my voice was starting to feel tired. A young girl came up to me and gave me a huge flowers, I took them and bowed in front of the audience. As the curtains came down, James the director approached me and gave me a hug "You seem to get better each night Lee." "Hey don't push your luck, I'm off tomorrow, my voice is starting to get tight," James laughed and kissed me on both cheeks, "You're a star Lee, a true star," James then walked off and I made my way to my dressing room. I sat down in front of the mirror and wiped my make up off, whilst a knock came to the door. "Come in," "Hey sweetie, great show tonight," "Thanks Charlotte, you weren't bad yourself," "Yes well if I keep up at this rate, my feet will probably get so hot they'll catch fire." I laughed. "Hey you'll never guess what?" Charlotte said. "What?" "Jane swore she saw John Lennon in the audience tonight and I think she said she saw him on the first night too, weird I didn't think he liked opera personally," I stared at Charlotte in the mirror, "Where is he now?" I asked. "I don't know, gone I guess," "He probably came with someone," "Nah, he seems to be leaving by himself, well that's what Jane said," Charlotte came towards me and helped me take my clothes off. "God, I wish I could have seen him, just a glimpse would have been enough," "Well you know what they say, 'Never meet your heroes, you'll only be disappointed," Charlotte laughed, "Well are you ready to go?" "Ready as I'll ever be, you coming?" "Not just yet, I need to talk to James, I'll meet you there," "Okay," I gave Charlotte a kiss on the cheek and made my way out of the theatre. As I walked down the alley, I felt a slight tap on my shoulder. I turned around. "Hello, Lee," I stepped back, "So you have been coming," John nodded. "I just wanted to see you," "Why didn't you just call me, tickets cost $90 and those are just the cheap ones," "I needed to see you perform, I needed to hear that voice, I fell in love with, I would have paid a thousand dollars to hear you sing," I smiled at him, and gave him a hug, tears were starting to stream down my face. "I missed you so much," I said to him. "And I've missed you to," "We broke away, John wiped my tear. "It's been 8 months," I said "I know, alot has happened," "I'm an Auntie, Simon had a little boy he's just turned 5 months his named Nathan," "Oh congratulations," John said to me. "How's May?" I asked. "Good, we're not together any more, I'm back with Yoko, we're expecting a child too," "Oh," "Yeah he's gonna be due in October," "You haven't got long then," "No I guess not," "Have you thought of any names?" "We quite like Sean, it's Irish for John, Julian's first name is actually John so it would be nice to keep the traditions," "Sean's a lovely name," "Yeah I think so too," We stared at each other. "So have you met anyone, since y'know..." I've had fleeting relationships, but they never lasted, so no one special, not for me anyway," "You'll find someone, you're too special Lee," "I thought I found someone, but I realised I could never have him." John kissed my hand "I'll always be a part of you, I'll always love you, no matter what," "John after the shows finished, I'm moving back to England, indefinitely or for at least a few years," "But, why?" "I've been in America for over a year now, and I just feel I have to go back home, see my friends and family, I think this is the best time, I'll also get theatre work in London." "So might not ever see you again," "I don't know it's too early to say, I don't have anything to come back for," "Not even me?" I looked at John, "You know, I haven't got you to come back too," "So after this we might not see each other again?" "Probably not," "John and I hugged and as I broke away from him he kissed me on the lips and then we started kissing passionately. I pulled myself away. "I think I should go," I said. "Yeah," I picked my bag off the floor "Goodbye John," "Goodbye Lee," I walked at into the open and started crying, but I didn't turn around, John was out of my life and there was no way I was backing out now.
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Post by snoopy on Feb 2, 2010 21:47:43 GMT 1
Hi Wow, what a great story ; too bad that's it already finished . Hope that there will be other stories from you in future.... LOL, Snoopy
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Post by lennonfan909 on Mar 14, 2010 23:19:48 GMT 1
Wow. Just wow. i loved every bit of that story... :-)
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Post by imagineforlennon on Mar 15, 2010 8:42:42 GMT 1
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