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Post by LucyDiamond on Aug 18, 2010 17:36:27 GMT 1
thank you! theres much more to come!
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Mrs. O'Boogie
Living life in peace
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Imagination is more important than knowledge
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Post by Mrs. O'Boogie on Aug 19, 2010 3:54:15 GMT 1
Well, Lucy my dear let me just say that your story is fantastic. Good plot, great dialoges an very interesting and surprising twists. You are a very good writer. Love the story is so fresh and funny. Jeanne is incredible! Congratulations this is a marvelous job so far and I can't wait to read more!! BTW the girl on my story is named Jenny, well actually is Jennifer but John calls her Jenny, you know how he is with nicknames. LOL I'm looking forward to read more!!
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Post by LucyDiamond on Aug 25, 2010 16:06:07 GMT 1
Chapter 17
“I’m shy, aye? I was just trying to be a gentleman, but if you insist.” he said smirking at me. “You really are perfect for John, always being pushy.” he added, his smirk growing bigger. I grinned. “Well thank you, I DO try.” John snickered at my comment, then sat up. “Well its getting late, we probably need to head home.” I sat up too, “okay I guess. Jackie, where you staying at?” “At a hotel right now, but all my clothes and stuff are still in my car at the Cavern Club.” “Oh okay well, we can go get your car and you can stay at my house okay? I don’t know why you didn’t think about that in the first place, you wanker!” I said, smacking Jackie in the back of the head. John arched an eyebrow at my insult. “Wanker? You stole me bloody word!” “No I didn’t I’ve always said that word.” “So have I!” He attempted to keep a straight face, but failed. “You guys are idiots you know that?” Jackie pointed out, matter-of-factly. “Thanks for noticing.” I said smiling like a moron. We all stood up and headed towards the car. We went to the Cavern Club first to get Jackie’s car, Paul and her rode in it to my house, while John rode with me. “How long do yeh think she is going to stay with you?” “I don’t know, however long she wants to I suppose. Why?” “Does that mean no Johnny sleep-overs?” he said with a pout. “Of course not, you can stay over whenever you want to!” I smiled. “I’m sure Jackie won’t mind, we can just get Paul to stay over too.” I giggled, and so did John. “Can I stay tonight?” “Umm, maybe not tonight, so Jackie and I can catch up a bit, but you can tomorrow night.” “Yeh know, that makes us sound like high school kids.” he changed his voice to try to sound like a girl.. “ ‘can I stay tonight please please please, I want to paint nails, and do our hair, and talk about boys alllll night!’ “ I laughed. “You are so weird!” “I know, but that is why you find me so irresistible, right?” he grinned cheekily. “Sure, we’ll go with that one.” We pulled up into my drive way. Paul helped Jackie carry her stuff into the house into the room she had when she lived with me before. “I guess I’ll run you boys home while she is unpacking. Get your goodbye smoochies in, Paulie.” He blushed a little, and Jackie snickered. He walked over to Jackie and gave her a hug. John gave Jackie a hug as well. “It was nice meetin’ yeh Jackie, thanks for keeping my girlfriend from getting killed.” he grinned. “It wasn’t her getting killed I was worried about.” she laughed. John, Paul, and I all walked out to my car, John sat in the passenger seat and Paul sat In the backseat behind John. He stayed quiet most of the time. “Why in the bloody ‘ell are you so quiet, Macca?” John asked, sounding a little obnoxious. “No reason, really, just thinking.” “ ‘Bout what. Jackie?” I asked, teasingly. “Yeah, can’t help it, she’s a nice girl.” I smiled and agreed. They are cute together, I can give them that, and Paul seems much happier, he’s not moping anymore, plus they seem to fit so much better together than he and I would have. I dropped Paul off at his house first, he reached through the window and gave me a small hug, and said bye to John. We got to John’s house and I walked with him to his door, he unlocked the door and we walked into the living room. “I can’t stay too long, don’t want Jackie to think I forgot ‘bout her.” I informed him, closing the door behind me. “She’ll be okay for a few more minutes.” he grabbed my face and kissed me fiercely. I wrapped my arms around his neck , and kissed him back. He moved his hand to the crook of my back and pulled me in closer. I tightened my arms around his neck, and kissed him with every bit of emotion I had in me. His lips were so soft and his mouth tasted so good. He pushed me back toward the door, pressing me up against it aggressively. He grabbed my right leg and wrapped on around his waist and started grinding into me. My eyes shot open and I pulled away from the kiss. I could barely breathe. “Are you okay, luv? Do you not like that?” “Yeah I do actually, I was just expecting a goodnight kiss, not all of this.” “Technically it still is a goodnight kiss, unless you want it to be more.” he kissed my neck, and I shivered. I felt the kiss turn into a grin at my reaction. “Johnny, your making it hard for me to leave!” “I’m sorry, I just can’t help it, your just so beautiful” he looked into my eyes and smiled. “but I understand, you need to leave. We can finish this another day.” I giggled nervously. “Yeah, another day.” “Good night, luv. Sweet dreams” He kissed me softly on the lips again. “Good night to you too Johnny.” I walked out the door and stumbled to my car. He made my brain dysfunctional, again! I drove home, smiling the whole way. I walked in the door and Jackie looked at me, arching an eyebrow.
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Mrs. O'Boogie
Living life in peace
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Imagination is more important than knowledge
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Post by Mrs. O'Boogie on Aug 26, 2010 3:53:23 GMT 1
getting better all the time
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lennonfan909
Trying to change the whole wide world
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Limitless, undying love which shines around me like a million suns and calls me on and on...
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Post by lennonfan909 on Oct 15, 2010 19:36:23 GMT 1
Wow, that's fantastic! I loved it!
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Post by LucyDiamond on Nov 13, 2010 1:14:56 GMT 1
thank you! i kinda disappeared for a while workin on other projects but i think its bout time i add some more
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snoopy
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Post by snoopy on Dec 31, 2010 0:53:09 GMT 1
Hi Thank's so much for the new chapter, just thrilling..... can't wait for the following one Snoopy
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Post by LucyDiamond on Jan 2, 2011 6:12:13 GMT 1
hehe thank you kinda slacked off a while on posting because i was working on many different stories at once, not to mention tryna start a story hopefully turned novel thats not beatle or john lennon related lol.
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Mrs. O'Boogie
Living life in peace
[M:717]
Imagination is more important than knowledge
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Post by Mrs. O'Boogie on Jan 3, 2011 6:20:45 GMT 1
Thank you for this new chapter!! Very sexy and funny, love your characters so far. I do love Jeannie attitude she is truly amazing. Same as Snoopy I can't wait to read more.
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runforyourlife
It's a long way to go
Just the sight of you makes night time bright.
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Post by runforyourlife on Feb 14, 2011 7:18:41 GMT 1
Wow, I loved this story! I can't wait for the next chapter(s). You're such a great writer! Keep it up!
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Post by LucyDiamond on Mar 4, 2011 7:01:39 GMT 1
thanks a bunch!! i have lots of different stories, but they're on my livejournal account
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Mrs. O'Boogie
Living life in peace
[M:717]
Imagination is more important than knowledge
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Post by Mrs. O'Boogie on Mar 6, 2011 2:29:27 GMT 1
thanks a bunch!! i have lots of different stories, but they're on my livejournal account Tell us please your Live Journal account!!. I'm on LJ too!! ;D I would love to take a look on your other stories.
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Post by LucyDiamond on May 5, 2011 18:20:33 GMT 1
Lucydiamond909 (some are slash i warn, i know some ppl are against it, but i write it just for fun lol)
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Post by LucyDiamond on May 5, 2011 19:06:00 GMT 1
Chapter 18
“Why is your face so red, Jeannie?” “eheh, umm, John, he can be so frustrating.” “Uh-oh, what did you guys do?” “Nothing! I swear. But damn if I didn’t have to come home.” I giggled. “You could’ve stayed longer, yeh know” “No, you just got here Jackie, we have hardly had any me and you time, I’ll be fine.” “Yeah, but will he.” she giggled. “He better be! So how long are you staying?” “A week, We are on break for college.” “Oh, well Paul’s going to be bummed.” “We can be pen pals, and you know I’ll visit any chance I get, and he IS famous, he has the money to travel to see me if he wanted to” “I’m sure he wants to, I can tell he really digs you.” “I know, its too cute.” She grinned. “I find it funny that this time last year we were just drooling over them talking about how fit they were and having our own little fantasies, and now look at us, one calls me his girlfriend and one of them is crushing on you.” I giggled. “Its even funnier because they aren’t the ones were fancying. I wanted Ringo and you wanted Paul.” She laughed. “Yeah, but I didn’t realize how much I actually liked John, me and him are a lot alike…its strange…and you and Paul are similar and the fact they are best friends just makes it better.” “Yep. You and John do make one hell of a couple I will say. I can tell by the way you two act around each other, and how red your face was when you came home.” she grinned. “Ha you better hush before I take me arse back over there!” I grinned cheekily, and thinking about what happened caused me to flush red again. Jackie snickered. “Damn I have never seen a man have this much affect on you, its hilarious!” “No it isn’t, shut it! Anyways, I’m pretty sleepy I think I’m going to go to get meself some sleep.” “Me too! Thanks for letting me stay here Jeannie!” “No problem, anytime, you know that!” I walked over to Jackie and gave her a hug. “Good night girl, love yeh.” “Night, love yeh, too!” I laid in bed thinking most of the night. ‘Girlfriend? John Lennon’s girlfriend? Really? Could this be happening, is it possible he really does like me like he says he does. I hope so, that’s why I need to hold back and not give in and sleep with him, just in case, because I don’t want this to end. If I sleep with him, he might leave, maybe that’s all he wants, but then again maybe not, he seems like he’s changed, yeah he will always be a very sexual guy, but that’s not ALL he thinks about , I can tell, he really does like me, for me, maybe its because I’m like him, and he’s a little cheeky and conceited, but oh well, so am I sometimes.’ All of a sudden my thoughts were interrupted by a ‘tap tap’ on my window. I reached into my bedside table and pulled out a switchblade my brother gave me for my birthday a few years ago, and headed to the window. I looked out and saw a shadow of someone lurking around outside. I jumped about 3 feet in the air, then realized it was John standing there, grinning like a twit. I opened the window. “What the bloody ‘ell are you doing here?” “I missed you.” he smiled and climbed in. I shook my head. “What are we, in high school? You could have just knocked on the door.” “Yeah, but didn’t want to disturb your friend. Can you do me a favor, though?” “What??” “Put the knife away, your kind of scaring me.” “Aww why? Don’t you like it a little kinky and painful?” I grinned. “Yeah but not a f**king knife! damn woman what you trying to do, kill me?” He smiled, and kissed me. “Of course not! I could never kill you! Your too special to me.” I smiled, not only because he was special but because I amused myself, I actually said something sweet, to his face. I laid the knife back down on the table. “Well good, I’m glad.” “Why?” Next thing I knew I was tackled to the bed. “That’s why.” “I see.” I looked up at him and attempted a glare. He laughed at me. “What’s funny?” “Your just too cute sometimes.” “Cute?!?” He grinned, and I remembered, the day we were at the studio and I called him cute. I giggled. “fine I guess you can call me cute, only If I can call YOU cute.” “Oh no!! Cute? Me? Never!!” He said sarcastically, then kissing me again, this time for longer. I remembered what I had told myself before he showed up, so I tickled his side. He stopped kissing me and looked at me. “What was that for?” “I don’t know, just felt like doin’ it.” “Good, me too.” he grinned goofily. “Not that, you pervert!” “Hey, you said it first, not me!” he smiled and kissed my neck. I felt him smile, and I was wondering what was on his mind when all of a sudden he bit my neck. I shivered, and moaned. “Johnny! Don’t do that!” He laughed, “Why not? You apparently liked it.” “Exactly!” “What’s the problem in liking something?” “I don’t know! You’re very difficult you know that?” “Yes, as a matter of fact I do.” he bit my neck again and kissed up to my ear and nibbled on my ear lobe. I was fighting the urge to moan again, but it didn’t fully work. He smiled at me sad attempt at holding back. “Your f**kin’ killing me, yeh know that, Johnny!” He giggled, “Like-wise, luv. Why do you keep holding back?” “Because…um…I don’t know…I just am…I like…making you wait, makes it more…interesting…yeh know…playing hard to get, that sort of thing.” “You’ll give in eventually, I know it.” “Really now?” “Yep.” He started kissing me again, aggressively. He started rubbing up my leg under my night gown, and got around to the front of my panties. I turned away from the kiss and grabbed his hand and moved it. He rolled off of me and just laid there next to me, like he was deep in thought. “Why must you do this to me Jeanne?” “I’m sorry John, I’m just not ready for that quite yet, give me a little time, okay?” I was hoping he didn’t feel upset or offended. He turned toward me and looked me in the eyes. “Its okay, I will wait, if its what you really want. I promise, your too precious, I don’t want to push you away. I lo….like you…a lot, I don’t want to ruin this.” “Thank you for understanding.” I smiled, I also noticed his slip up. ‘did he almost say he loves me? No way’ “Of course, luv.” he leaned over and kissed me softly on the lips. “Well I guess I should head back home. I’ll call you in the morning when I wake up, ‘kay?” “ ‘kay. Good night Johnny.” “Good night Jeannie.” he got up and climbed back out of my window.
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