BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
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And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 27, 2007 14:08:28 GMT 1
Okay... So there's a thread in wich you can post Beatle art... Can we also have a thread in wich you can post art (drawings, paintings, lyrics, poems) wich is not related to the Beatles?
And since I'm starting the thread, I think it's only fair I should post the first poem as well...
Gazing out of the window, up into the clouds.
The sunlight is fading, the clouds then turning pink.
The air is turning colder, sending shivers down your spine.
And you only listen, trying to ban out your doubts
The leaves of the trees are rushing, whispering in the dark
The wind moving them, letting them hear their sound out loud
Hearing the sounds of the world, the earth surrounding you
And the rain begins to fall from the sky, your mind turns blank.
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Post by nowheregirl on Apr 27, 2007 18:23:47 GMT 1
Yes, you can start as many threads as you like!  I love the poem. Thanks for sharing it with us!  |
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 28, 2007 9:48:18 GMT 1
Ah, that's good then Thank you I'll post some other stuff here later, ok?  (but I first need to sort it all out on my computer, this thing is like, stuffed with poems and pics of drawings etc. X'D ) |
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jean
Trying to change the whole wide world
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Post by jean on Apr 28, 2007 11:57:10 GMT 1
Beautiful poem. I'll look forward to seeing some more. |
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 28, 2007 13:41:08 GMT 1
Ok, I'll post some more then These are actually lyrics, but they're the first lyrics I've ever written so... Don't judge too hard Anyway... Don't have a melody for it And neither a nice title, so if you know something just tell Whisper:If you can miss you can miss you can miss me much
If you can catch you might catch you might catch loveI can’t leave you like this, let you left behind I can’t stay here, not stay here, in this state of mind I can’t go, I can’t go, wouldn’t know what to do I can’t sleep, I can’t sleep, I can’t sleep, oh though I want to get away from this, from this life But it doesn’t seem to work, nothing to do I am glued sticked to this place, leave it, try But it doesn’t seem to work, so I stay oh-oh Look up, see the sky Why not do, do what you want Why not, wonder why See the grass, the trees View what would be left behind And do you care? Would you care? Would you leave it all behind? |
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Post by lennonfan on Apr 28, 2007 17:01:11 GMT 1
Great lyrics!  That would make an awesome song if you had a melody to go with it. I'm not sure what title you could give it...maybe "Can't leave you like this" or "Left Behind”. Or "Miss Me Much"... I don't know.  |
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 29, 2007 10:57:37 GMT 1
Great lyrics! That would make an awesome song if you had a melody to go with it. I'm not sure what title you could give it...maybe "Can't leave you like this" or "Left Behind”. Or "Miss Me Much"... I don't know. Then you now know why I asked for a title Haha. I find it very hard to make something up for that.. Guh. I wanted to say it's killing me but it's not so.. xD *ahum* Oh, but I really think it would make a good song (And if I've got a melody with it, I just might post it on here as well ) I like writing about emotions though, and rather not love since that's described a thousand times already, if you know what I mean. At least 80-90% of the songs on the radio IS about love, after all. Hehe. I'll post some more, but why don't other people post??!! Heart pounding heavily in your chest
A wave of emotion taking over your body
Trying not to think about anything at all
And willing to let it rest
You feel the warm water leaving your eyes
No more abled to control your body
You're starting to tremble, hating the people
Everybody is telling liesOh, and here's a drawing I made (along with a poem, that is)  The Bluebird The living Bluebird flew over land to sea He wanted to taste the salty water Dreamed of seeing more of the world And he thought the other birds'd agree But they wouldn't come with him now So he flew there all by himself Over the green and grassy mountains And then, just when he started flying low He saw the rough sea upcoming The silty breeze he could smell But there were only big white birds And none of his own So he went back to the place he came from To the other Bluebirds in the valley The cave they were living in, once so cold Now warm and inviting, as if it were a song And the Bluebirds started singing then Their songs were heared everywhere Across the mountains, over the sea And they were heared by all the men |
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Post by lennonfan on Apr 29, 2007 13:46:15 GMT 1
Wow, that's a great drawing! (And the poem's great too). I would post something if I had done anything to post, but I'm not very creative.  |
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 29, 2007 14:08:27 GMT 1
Wow, that's a great drawing! (And the poem's great too). I would post something if I had done anything to post, but I'm not very creative. Ah, too bad  That's a pity, really. I'll post some more, then *turns slightly green* oh man... I just came across some old poems of mine  they're not too great X'D Although I have found a better one (but it is one of the newer poems) The dizzyman just came to town He came to sing a song And as the player furrowed his brow Everybody would sing along When he finished playing Everybody would scream and shout And then he would give them Another turn around 'And when he finally went away The crowd still calling for him He'd think about a wonderfull day The town was statisfied And then he would go away Travel to another town And the dizzyman would play His talent would be shown Um. And a painted mask... I've made this a month ago or so, I don't really know. It's quite new anyway  (And I'm very sorry if someone's going to feel bad about this all... I dunno but I just feel like I've got to apologize... Can't help I just might be little creative (oh, and really. most of the time I don't even LIKE it ) ) |
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Post by nowheregirl on Apr 29, 2007 15:17:08 GMT 1
Don't apologize. You're very talented! I like the mask. |
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 29, 2007 17:09:48 GMT 1
Don't apologize. You're very talented! I like the mask. Haha, thank you  Oh. And I almost forgot to post a pic  (First I drew the drawing with a ballpoint, within five minuits... And after that I spent more than an hour colouring it all and drawing the background xD ;D ) |
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Post by ~Lennon Girl~ on Apr 29, 2007 23:14:26 GMT 1
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BudgieWudgieWeed
Dreaming of the past
[M:601]
And when the rain begins to fall, your mind turns blank.
Posts: 415
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Post by BudgieWudgieWeed on Apr 30, 2007 12:28:30 GMT 1
thanks! |
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(but I first need to sort it all out on my computer, this thing is like, stuffed with poems and pics of drawings etc. X'D )
That would make an awesome song if you had a melody to go with it. I'm not sure what title you could give it...maybe "Can't leave you like this" or "Left Behind”. Or "Miss Me Much"... I don't know. 
That's a pity, really. I'll post some more, then 
they're not too great X'D Although I have found a better one (but it is one of the newer poems)
