jabble524
Nowhere is the place to be
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Post by jabble524 on Jan 19, 2009 10:30:39 GMT 1
Kisses Indicate I can leave the place where time stops Just outside reality I can leave the place where time stops Material paradise vanishes Censored screams whispered They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion Kisses indicate the illusion There's correlations between your lacerations Watch the sunrise And fall asleep in your arms Coffee kisses at sunset And wake me from my dreams Censored screams whispered They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion Kisses indicate the illusion There's correlations between your lacerations Validate Poisonous perspectives Not labeled lucrative But where's the validation Was it just an estimation Abstract and ambiguous Amorphous and exclusive Optimal through greed's opticals Your perspectives keep us frozen They mutate the mirage To influence their opulence Abstract and ambiguous Amorphous and exclusive Acceptance without thought www.myspace.com/jabble524
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givepeaceachance
Dreaming of the past
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All we are saying is give peace a chance
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Post by givepeaceachance on Jan 21, 2009 21:30:23 GMT 1
Beautiful poem jabble.
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jabble524
Nowhere is the place to be
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Post by jabble524 on Jun 9, 2010 6:31:32 GMT 1
Thanks. I appreciate you taking the time to read, and offer such kind feedback. This is a three part poem called Insomnia.
Insomnia
Romance awakens the unconscious And in heartbreak it never sleeps An insomnia of revelations Shattered promises, we swore to keep
Paper tigers and Icarus wings Fly to the sun, when the siren sings Oedipus eyes to navigate the maze False bravado, caught in the minotaur’s gaze
Your Prometheus Kiss Stole the fire from my heart The eagle is my friend But you tear me apart
Luscious lips and Freudian slips Red herrings lead me into loving arms Denial is the architect of illusion On a night of cold truth
(Part 2)
Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies We lost our immortality today Nine lives withered, and faded away
Precious memories of passion and romance Wrapped in beautifully decorated cocoons Safe from the bitterness of regret And from being devoured, by the cruelty of time
Leeches lurking in sultry eyes They covet intensely, and rarely compromise I want to hear it crackle, and smell the cinders Incarnate illusions, behind benevolent smiles
(Part 3)
Exiled connoisseur, of forbidden pleasures Scarlet letters carved in flesh Exploring ancient catacombs of the unconscious Searching for past lives and forgotten lovers Scattered throughout the sands of time
Vanquished virtuoso, piecing together fragmented memories And mysterious dreams, veiled in shadows Channeling abstract and elusive sensations To stimulate senses, no longer aroused By the narrow spectrum of consciousness
Scavenging the obscure corners Of the aficionado’s abandoned wasteland Looking for the path to serenity Tired legs and weary eyes wishing To be home in your heart
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Post by LucyDiamond on Jun 9, 2010 16:58:11 GMT 1
your poems are amazing
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jabble524
Nowhere is the place to be
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Post by jabble524 on Jun 16, 2010 17:34:22 GMT 1
Thanks. I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer such kind feedback. These poems were just about exploring the unconscious and describing what I saw/felt.
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Post by LucyDiamond on Jun 16, 2010 18:45:35 GMT 1
those are the best kinds of poems
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