halfofthesky
On the old dirt road
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Post by halfofthesky on Mar 11, 2009 0:23:01 GMT 1
About three years ago, we had to write a dedication poem, so, of course, I wrote mine to John!!! What do you think, hmm? ---------------------------- All he was saying was give peace a chance. For all his dear public, he wrote a few songs about a fact important not to prolong. Hoping to stop states brawling Vietcong and that maybe we would all get along. Maybe if he had stayed in this throng we would have learned how these fought wars were all wrong. Voices rose to the rebellious skies for there was hate when soldier for country dies. Through songs and lyrics message cries, opening many people's eyes. Alas no more men on flaming pies. His thoughts were on hatreds ending nigh. He pondered through dark night, how to stop all of this fight. Ocean Child called forward his love on a whim, and press had wondered what she did to him. Then he hid in a bag to hide what he had, but to show us something different. And this only helped him give peace a chance. One sad day he was blown away, Him not getting what he did. Never will hear what we have say, our comprehensions still kids. Millions of people have cried the message made hasn't died! Please just once for him give peace a chance
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Paulie
Trying to change the whole wide world
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TOTALLY McCARTNEY!!!!
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Post by Paulie on Mar 11, 2009 12:16:16 GMT 1
nice =)
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SeaShellEyes
Nowhere is the place to be
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"Time we enjoy wasting is not time wasted."
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Post by SeaShellEyes on May 29, 2009 19:37:29 GMT 1
Aww that's so sweet! I wrote one too it's one here it's called You Are
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